Sometimes I rush through town.
Sometimes I walk slowly.
Here is what I discovered
a few lines and a message.
Translated from Norwegian.
"If only the sky was not so grey,
I should have hired a plane,
written letters using smoke
and told you that you are beautiful."
The tone of the poem feels appropriately Scandinavian.
ReplyDeleteNot bad, a bit sad perhaps...
ReplyDeleteVery cute...and poignant. We often have skywriters doing messages to "lovers" in the skies along our Atlantic coast beaches.
ReplyDeleteIt does seem a bit melancholy.
ReplyDeletethough your first lines was the poem, it s a good beginning ;) We all need poetry !
ReplyDeleteVery thoughtful...
ReplyDeleteI rather like it...
ReplyDeleteOh I love that Gunn, how wonderful that you spotted it.
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